Monday, March 30, 2009

A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words

Is the family dinner and everyone is in the dinner table but not me im in the floor begging for bread. i smell the bread and the pumkin pie. I was sleeping in the floor when mom and grandma got the bread and pumkin pie and i rush to the table. The family was eating and i was in momthers lap begging for bread. The older boy named Jorge didnt want to give me some pie because he was just eating the pie like if there was no tomorrow. He was eating and stuffing the pie in his mouth. I was hungry too but no one care about the me. Not even the mom that gives the horse a big piece of bread and i get nothing. the little boy named Armando wasnt eating it look like he was not hungry but he was staring at the pie a lot.The father was getting a plate for he could get some of the pumkin pie and bread. Then the girl named Sandra didnt look like she was hungry she just wanted to feed the horse too but not me never the dog. Im begging and begging and my mouth tasting the taste of the bread but no one wanted to feed me. i was barking and barking but the just shh me up. which made me sad. The grandma which everyone calls her grandman i dont know her named but she look sad like me because it look like she didnt like cutting bread.
The family finish eating and they didnt have me food because they have it to the horse. i was mad and sad because i didnt get no bread or pie which i stay in the kitchen. i saw that grandma was nitting something i didnt know what and mom was taking care of the plants. The boy was the first one too finish eating because he wanted to eat fats for he could go play with his friends. He wanted to play with in the first day of summer. The birds came from summer the trees are green as every summer is. Sandra went with the horse with a litte bread because mom didnt let her give a big piece to the horse. Then Armando went to follow Sandra to the barn where the horses were. the family hd 3 horses which the father would get up early to feed them. they had a white horse, black horse and a brown horse. Armando wanted to get inside the barn but mom always tolled him not to but he didt listing and went inside the barn. Then i followed him and sandra went with jorge to play. The horse got scared that Armando came out of no where and the horse kicks Armando in the leg and he falls to the floor. i stared barking and barking until mom or dather came. they didnt came so i went back to the kitcken and bited mom dress and pulled her to the barn where she could of see Armando in the floor and bleeding from his leg. Father took armando to the hostipal.
They took a long time. i was waiting in the door of the house waiting for Armando return. Then like 1 week and 3 days then came and Armando had something white in his leg which i didnt know what it was. they stared petting me more than ever. i was happy. now the dinner that came they gave me some bread and pie. Everyone was giving me a piece of bread. Also grandma the thing she was nitting was a shirt just for me. it fit me good and i like it because now in the the winter i wouldnt be cold no more. Now every dinner the family has they give me bread and they will never give bread to the horse ever again.

Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Pet Peeves

1. When my mom tells me to clean my room.

2. When people hit me in my back.

3. People touching touch my stuff.

4. i dont like when cars horn repeatedly

5. i dont like traffic.

6. when my parents scream at me

7. wet willies.

8. titi twister

9. when people hit me in my head

10. when people make fun of other people

11. when people get to cocky.

12. when people throw gun at other people and me too.

13. when i feel like time is going slow in school.

14. when i get low scores in test.

15. when my computer go slow.

16. when my soccer shots are slow.

17. cup checks

18. when i miss the goal in soccer.

19. when people call me chavela

20. when my sister drinks my pop without asking me

21. when my dog barks at other people.

22. summer school

23. obivous questions

24. when people show off their new stuff

25. when i cant sleep in night.

Monday, March 23, 2009

The Secret

It my best friend's deepest, darkest secret and it would be a hard one to keep. It was a Saturday morning i was getting ready to go outside when my friend called me threw the phone and tolled me if i could of go to his house to play soccer. So i went to his house and i came inside his house and he was in his room playing with his brother. Then he tells me to go to the backyard so we could play. So then we were playing until both of us got tired and we went to his house again. then he tolled me a secret that he wanted to do. I was shock of what he has tolled me. it was a secret that had to be tell but it couldn't because i promise my friend i wouldn't but i knew i had to tell someone.

Days pass and i want to tell the secret to some one but i cant because i promise my best friend i wouldn't. the days pass slowly each moment i would want to tell some one. Two weeks pass i could take it no more and i have to tell some one about his secret i ran to the church and i went to the priest to talk to him for advice to tell my secret or not. when i went to the church i stared talking to him he have me good advise of what i should do. i ran to the police station and i tolled them the secret of my friend the police officer took me to his house but it was too late my best friend went t0 do the secret he tolled me he was going to do. We had to go where he was going but i didn't knew where he was going he just tolled me what he was going to do but he never tolled me where he was going. i was nervous because i didn't knew where he was doing or where his going.

his mother was also nervous because she just wanted him back but he didn't. She was the only parent because his dad was murder and my friend was with him but he survive but his father didn't. then i tolled his mother what he tolled he wanted to do. I felt sad because i tolled her too late and maybe my friend could be laying down in the floor. The secret was that he wanted to get revenge of the murder of his father and he saw the face of the killer and when he tolled me the secret he said that he saw him walking and i followed him to his house. So he would go over there and get revenge. the police didn't knew what to do because they didn't knew where the man was living and the man a criminal but he escaped and couldn't been found.

The next day the police called and said that they found him. when they found him his shirt was cover with blood and his mother said what did you did. He said that he killed the murder of my father. Later they found the body and was confirm that it was the killer of his father. then the police arrested my friend and was put in trial. They tolled him that he will be serving serving some time because he committed murder but he killed a criminal that escaped from jail and killed two men. i was sad because i wouldn't see him for a bit and because he probably would be mad at me for telling his secret but this secret i had to tell because if some bad happen to him people or his mother wouldn't know because his mother works two shifts and she wouldn't notice. so if there a secret that a friend tells you and its abut some one life then you will have to tell because he could get hurt and maybe never seen again.

Thursday, March 19, 2009

Her Mysterious Death

Her death was due to mysterious circumstances and I was assigned to the case. The case they called me to do a death case of a women. Her named was Betty, she was white kind of pale and blonde hair. She worked in a restaurant in Chicago Illinois. One day she left work at 8 and the next day she didn’t came. She didn’t came for 3 weeks straight and the Manager will call her and call her and she wouldn’t pick. So They called me to solved the case to find her even if she was dead or alive. I put posters of her picture saying that person was missing for several weeks and might be find dead. I was trying the best to solved this case because I really need the money and if I solved a case I will get race which I need so much. I was putting posters all over Chicago trying to find the women. People don’t call I was frustrated because I didn’t knew if I could of solve this mystery.

One morning when I was in my bed sleeping my phone rings. I got up and answer the phone and someone was calling me that they have found the body of Betty. I got change and I went to the crime scene. The place where they found betty was in Riis Park in the pond. The man who found her body was named Eduardo. He said that he was walking around the pond when he saw that a lot of flies and it was smelling bad. When he went to investigate he said he saw the body flooding backwards. This really scared Eduardo and he knew it was her because when he was coming to the Park in a pole it said a Missing sing. So then he runs where he found that and dial the number. The body was cover by grass and like the women was pale she even came more pale when they found her. It look like she was beaten to death but they didn’t knew. Then I decided to take the body to the hospital to check the death of Betty

I took the body named betty to the hospital to investigate on the women death. They say that they reported her missing on march the first. Now it’s the 25 of March so it is 25 days that maybe the women was killed. The doctors check X-ray but she didn’t had to broken bones or anything that could killed her. The doctors say that maybe she was killed from drug abuse but the friends and family say that she never took drugs. Then doctors say that the only possible explanation was that see die of natural causes. The problem was that she disappear after work but the thing is the where she work was like 5 miles away from work and her house was like 2 blocks away where she work at. Also she didn’t had to car so she could just go over there. This was a mysterious case and I cant find nothing about the women death.

Months pass and I still couldn’t find how Betty death was or how she was found in Riis park 5 miles away from where she work and had no car. This case was a thought one and I was about to quit this case. Then first I went to Riis Park to investigate the crime scene. After I was about to leave I see that car tracks were cover by grass. I took the grass away and I see car track where it ended in the pond. Where the track ended if you would of look to the other side it was where the body of Betty was found. I look where the tracks were and I see I needle and which taught me that she was poison and was murder. Then I rush to the hospital and the body of Betty was still there so I tolled the doctor if she could probably be poison and the doctor check that she was poison but they didn’t knew who it was. I solved the case but the killers could be anywhere and I don’t think we could find him… 2 years pass and the killers of Betty were no where to be found. I might think they went to other country but we don’t know. We do know that someday I will find the killer.

Wednesday, March 18, 2009

How To Make Logandale Better

How to make Logandale better

I could think of 3 good reason that could make Logandale a better school. One reason that could make the school better is to make the school a little bigger. Second reason is they that could make the school better having better food and more fruit. My last reason is that the school would better if students don’t tease or make fun of students. These things could make Logandale a better school to be in don’t you think?

The first reason is that they need to make Logandale a little bit more bigger because the school is too small. The school is small because it could only hold like about 300 students and that’s a little. Kids will see that Logandale is small and maybe it would be too crowed so they won’t come. If they see that it’s to small then they will think that the classes are going to be small and, that maybe there’s no gym or something so they won’t come. They need to make it bigger so kids won’t think that is too small or there’s no room.

My second reason that could make Logandale a better school is to have better food and healthy food. Kids will come if schools give better food because they don’t want to go to a school that only serves cold lunch or other food that don’t taste good. They will want to come to Logandale because they will like the food. If we also had healthy food then parents will be happy because they will know that their kids are having healthy meals and they will tell their friends or other family members to come to Logandale and more kids will come. If they have better food kids will like to come to Logandale and parents will be happy because their kids are having good healthy meal.

My third reason that would make Logandale a better school is to stop kids from making fun of other kids. I think that this is the most important thing that we need to improve or change. If we don’t change it then some students will be sad and maybe go crying when, their going home from school because they be getting pick on. If students stop teasing other students the students will come home happy because he had a good time in school and didn’t go pick at. Students will make more friends if they don’t get pick at. They wont be afraid to talk to other students. They wouldn’t move to other schools because they wont want to leave. They wont want to move because if they don’t get tease and have friends they wouldn’t but, if they getting tease they would want to move because they don’t want to get tease no more. So to make students stay we need to change that students should not pick on other students don’t you think that?

In conclusion I could think of 3 things that could make Logandale a better school. One reason is that we need to make the school bigger because if other students see that Logandale is a good and big school then they will come but if its small they wont. My second reason is to make Logadale a better school is to have better food and healthy food. I think if the food is good then more kids will come to the school and parents will be happy because they know that the food their kids is eating is healthy. My last reason to make Logandale a better school is to make students stop teasing other students because if they do then they will want to move to other school, but if there not they will want to stay because they will have friends. So these are the reason that could make Logandale a better school.

Monday, March 16, 2009

Jose Delgado life story

It was on October 5 , 1994 I was 2 years old and I was waiting in the hospital for my baby brother. Then Finally my dad came and tolled me to come with him and he took me where my mom was and then there was my brother. I saw him red but then they clean him up and then he would cry and cry and wouldn't stop. He would cry and go back to sleep which was weird at a time. It was a nightmare because when we went home he would sleep and my parents would look at him a lot and they wouldn't pay attention to me. I was getting jealous because they would pay attention to me but now that I have a brother it change my life. When my parents left and went to do some things around the house I got un top of the heater and looked at my baby brother. He was just laying there with his blue blanket and sound asleep. when I saw him I thought that he would be a good brother and I would play with him a lot and take care of him. the days came and family members would come and see my baby brother. They will tell my parents if they could carry him and they would. then my brother would start crying and my mom will give him his bottle and he would stop.

Then he stared to grow up a little and would play a lot. He was almost going to be 1 year old and my parents were going to give him a birthday party. My parents were exited because it was going to be my brother 1st birthday party. They were preparing because the party was going to be this Saturday and my parents were already buying the candy and decorations. They also went to buy his PIÑATA and it was of a horse. When they thought the PIÑATA he liked it so much because he would carry it anywhere. Then he help me to put the candy inside the PIÑATA but usually he will throw it. Then when it was his birthday a lot of people came and they were having a good time. Then my dad got the PIÑATA and the kids stared hitting it with the wooden stick. Then my brother went to hit it but he did not want to because he was scared so my mom just have the stick to my other cousin and he stared hitting it. He broke it and all the candy went out. My brother didn't go a lot of candy so I have him all my candy. Then my mom got the cake and we all staring singing happy birthday to my brother. Then my mom put some cream at my brothers checks and my dad took a picture. my mom cut the cake and have it to the kids. The cake was good even my brother like it because he finish it too. after the party my parents and my brother went to sleep because they were all tired.

Then when y brother was able to walk and he was already 3 years old and he would go outside a lot with my Uncle named Eduardo. he would teach how to play soccer but he was little so my brother was just only run around. then when I would go to school my brother would cry because he wanted to go with me to school but he couldn’t because he was too little and didn’t know nun. He would cry and cry until I would come back. sometimes he wouldn’t cry because he would be with my Uncle allot. Then when my brother was able to go to school he would like playing soccer and he was getting better at it. Then when it was his first game I went to see him but he was so nervous that he didn’t play like he would normally play outside with my uncle. then during the week he would go to training. he would go like 2 times a week for training and on Saturdays and Sundays he would play. when he was 6 years old we got a dog. Me and My brother always wanted a dog and we finally got one. When we got our dog he was so small and so cute. He was a Chihuahua so he was small and my brother named him Buddy because he would see a lot of Air Buds movies and he named it Buddy.

he was growing up fast because months pass and years pass he would grow but not enough because I was still way taller then him. he is already in first grade and I would walk him to school everyday because we would go to the same school. I will always take him to breakfast and he would drink his milk and sometimes the food they give. During school I didn’t see him much. I would maybe see him sometimes in the hall but usually I didn’t. then when I went to middle school I wouldn’t see him because the elementary was one building and middle school was another building so I didn’t see him until we finish school. soon after school he would go home and eat and then he would go to soccer practice. He was getting better since the first time he played soccer. he was a better goalie now because when I went so see his games they wouldn’t score on him a lot. even with the hard teams they wouldn’t score on him a lot. Then he quit to be goalie and stared playing in the field as a mid fielder. he was also good in there because he would play good and his moves where good. The moves he learn he got teach by his friend Edgar that knew a lot of soccer skills and he teach my brother. Then when my brother went to a tournament they almost won 1st place but unfortanlly they lost in penalties. They play good because my brother score a goal in each match of the games.

At age 10 years old he had a injury in his hand by playing soccer. They push my brother and he fell bad in the floor which he dislocated his hand. He was crying because his hand was dislocated and he couldn’t move it. When we went to the doctor he located back to its place with out surgery or nothing but it still hurtled my brother so he couldn’t play soccer for 4 weeks and he had to wear a bandage for the hand wouldn’t be hurting a lot. after four weeks he could of play but now he was a little scare because he would think that it would happen again and he would go threw the pain again. Then after like a couple of games he would forget and wouldn’t be scare anymore but sometimes he would remember.

at age 12 was when my brother left elementary and went to middle school but unmorally I didn’t see my brother because when he went to logandale I went to high school so now I wouldn’t see him in the morning or during. The only time I could of seen him was when I came home. After he was in Logandale I was helping him in his homework because the work from logandale was more harder than Avondale. I would help him usually every day because he wouldn’t get it. then in 7 grade he had it. It was also a bad year because it was when he first go a F in school. My parents were mad but not a lot because it was his first F. IN school he would stay for boys and girls because he said he wanted to do his homework but I don’t think he wanted to go for homework maybe he wanted to go just to be with a girl but I don’t know. Then in the summer he tolled me that he had found the special girl and that he love her a lot. I was happy for him because it was just like yesterday that I saw him in the hospital in my moms arm now he has grow up and now he guts a girlfriend. Now they been going out for a long time almost 8 months and he is very happy.