How to make Logandale better
I could think of 3 good reason that could make Logandale a better school. One reason that could make the school better is to make the school a little bigger. Second reason is they that could make the school better having better food and more fruit. My last reason is that the school would better if students don’t tease or make fun of students. These things could make Logandale a better school to be in don’t you think?
The first reason is that they need to make Logandale a little bit more bigger because the school is too small. The school is small because it could only hold like about 300 students and that’s a little. Kids will see that Logandale is small and maybe it would be too crowed so they won’t come. If they see that it’s to small then they will think that the classes are going to be small and, that maybe there’s no gym or something so they won’t come. They need to make it bigger so kids won’t think that is too small or there’s no room.
My second reason that could make Logandale a better school is to have better food and healthy food. Kids will come if schools give better food because they don’t want to go to a school that only serves cold lunch or other food that don’t taste good. They will want to come to Logandale because they will like the food. If we also had healthy food then parents will be happy because they will know that their kids are having healthy meals and they will tell their friends or other family members to come to Logandale and more kids will come. If they have better food kids will like to come to Logandale and parents will be happy because their kids are having good healthy meal.
My third reason that would make Logandale a better school is to stop kids from making fun of other kids. I think that this is the most important thing that we need to improve or change. If we don’t change it then some students will be sad and maybe go crying when, their going home from school because they be getting pick on. If students stop teasing other students the students will come home happy because he had a good time in school and didn’t go pick at. Students will make more friends if they don’t get pick at. They wont be afraid to talk to other students. They wouldn’t move to other schools because they wont want to leave. They wont want to move because if they don’t get tease and have friends they wouldn’t but, if they getting tease they would want to move because they don’t want to get tease no more. So to make students stay we need to change that students should not pick on other students don’t you think that?
In conclusion I could think of 3 things that could make Logandale a better school. One reason is that we need to make the school bigger because if other students see that Logandale is a good and big school then they will come but if its small they wont. My second reason is to make Logadale a better school is to have better food and healthy food. I think if the food is good then more kids will come to the school and parents will be happy because they know that the food their kids is eating is healthy. My last reason to make Logandale a better school is to make students stop teasing other students because if they do then they will want to move to other school, but if there not they will want to stay because they will have friends. So these are the reason that could make Logandale a better school.
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10 years ago
you did a nice job jose I liked what you wrote.
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