Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Hansel and Gretel

Tell this story through any of the character's eyes ( Mother, Father, Hansel, Gretel, Old Women)


It was a morning after noon and we are a poor family that we can even afford to buy food for our own children. we didnt know what to do no more. until my wife said that we should abandon in the forest and we will go back home. i didnt agree with her because i know we didnt had food but they are my kids and i dont want to leave them in the forest where animals could eat them piece by piece. then she said that if we dont do this that all four of us are going to die of hunger. she said that we will light a fire and give both of them a piece of bread. then i didnt know what to do because if we dont do this then we all going to die of hunger. we had to do this but i didnt want to. it was the morning when we were going to abandom our children in the forest. i didnt feel happy or great that we were going to leave them on the forest. i remember when HAnsel wass looking back at the house alot and i think he knew what we were going to do. then when we got in the middle of the forest we lighted a fire and we tolled them that we were going to get wood and just stay here and we will get you two when we were finish when we left my wife was happy that now we had more food for her and me but i called her a selfish girl because you rather want you kids to die instead of you. she didnt care and we both went home. we had food but i didnt ate much because i had a feeling that something was going to happen to them. Days past and i would always get wood and things for the house but i was never happy even if i had more food. three days past my wife die. i was sad because i loved her but at the same time i didnt because she abandon our children so we could have more food. then it was bad a had even more food that i could give to my children but they werent here. i wanted to look for them but it was like already a week and they could be anywhere by now and if i go i might ran out of food and then im going to die. i wanted to get my children back but there was no way i could of get them back. they would be anywhere in the forest. they could be eaten already but i never wanted to think that but when more than 3 days past it was getting clear to me that they might of get killed or die of hunrger which i wqas getting depress every day. i would cry and think about them when they were little.

Every night i couldnt sleep wondering what my children are doing and what are happing to them . i was mad at my self for abandon them and anythign that happen to them i will never forgive my self because it was my fault too for listing to my wife and anbandon them. it was days and i waqs never happy until one day i went where if we left them but when i got there no one was there so i went back home. i went to eat a little more. the next morning i was even more depress because it was like more than 3 weeks that we abandon them i was already thinking the worst of my children and i wanted to move on but i couldnt. i would cry even more and i would say to god that im sorry i did this but i just wanted my children back. i pray and pray.then that afternoon i see that two children are running towards me and i saw that it was Hansel and Gretel and i became happy. i was even happier when they got some jewelry and pearls which now we could get even more food for everyone and find a new house and not in the forest where bad memories are found. soon we were a happy family.

9 comments:

  1. qood story qood deatailsz =]
    -HONEyCOMBSz-

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  2. like jasmin said good story but i bet you that she did not even read the title lol..=] good job

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  3. oooh not really because i asked her did you read it she is like no what is it about lol

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  4. shesz lying lolsz no le agas caso a la pajara lol

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  5. i swear on anything that she told me that jasmin tu pareses pajara with your hairs blowing all over sence you have the air lol... but she did not jose

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  6. lolsz callate dalia lolsz
    ur story is about the 3 little piqsz...
    lol
    i tinkk lmao hahah jjkkk lolsz
    is about hansel && gretel lmao

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  7. ay jasmin of curse is about hansel and gretel you c jose i am right she did not read it ha

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  8. miraa dalia tu callate cus i bet u didnt even read it lolsz
    ahaha i did i tookk myyy time... loslz hahaha mmm i qottt time wow lmsoz aahahahaha lols

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  9. hahaha i know i didnt lol hahahaha but no jose she did not and plus when i opened your page allot of your windows poped up

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